Fluttershy reading a fashion magazine
>"Ooooooh, that one's cute!" "But so is this one... This one not so much, but look at that one!"
>She sees something she really likes
>"Look, Angel, don't you think this would look good on me? Let's go shopping!"
They leave and head towards the town town and enter Rarity's boutique
Fluttershy practically storms inside and doesn't even check if Rarity's there.
>"Hey, Rarity, I hope you don't mind, but, uh, I've seen an amazing wool hat in the new *fashion magazine*
>After getting no immediate reply, Fluttershy begins searching for Rarity.
>"Rarity? Are you there? Uhm, did I come at a wrong time? Should I leave again?"
Fluttershy was a bit scared, but moreso concerned about the well being of a friend, so she musters all of her courage and heads upstairs to look for Rarity.
>"Rarity, are you up here? I'm sorry if I'm intruding, but I gotta make sure you're ok!"
>She checks Rarity's bedroom first, where she finds Rarity sobbing and crying her eyes out.
>"Rarity, what's wrong? Did- did something terrible happen?"
>Rartiy tries to talk, but can't, and now cries even more.
>Rarity signals Fluttershy via handigns that she lost her voice, and so did the other ponies of the mane 6.
>Fluttershy tries to comfort Rarity, but doesn't really know what to do, so she asks the viewers for assistance.
"Uhm, I'm really really sorry to bother you, but, my friends need help rrreeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaally bad, so, uhm, I hope it wouldn't be too much of a hassle, but, could you lend us your voice, please? I mean, I'd understand if you rather wouldn't, but, it would make me and the other ponies really happy if you did, so... *Squee smile*"
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Yeah, I don't know why I wrote the first one how I did it, either. I'm tired, I heard some music, and things got out of hand. I hereby officially apologize. From now on nearly all of my writing will be up to standards, but still feel free to post improvements.
>"Ooooooh, that one's cute!" "But so is this one... This one not so much, but look at that one!"
>She sees something she really likes
>"Look, Angel, don't you think this would look good on me? Let's go shopping!"
They leave and head towards the town town and enter Rarity's boutique
Fluttershy practically storms inside and doesn't even check if Rarity's there.
>"Hey, Rarity, I hope you don't mind, but, uh, I've seen an amazing wool hat in the new *fashion magazine*
>After getting no immediate reply, Fluttershy begins searching for Rarity.
>"Rarity? Are you there? Uhm, did I come at a wrong time? Should I leave again?"
Fluttershy was a bit scared, but moreso concerned about the well being of a friend, so she musters all of her courage and heads upstairs to look for Rarity.
>"Rarity, are you up here? I'm sorry if I'm intruding, but I gotta make sure you're ok!"
>She checks Rarity's bedroom first, where she finds Rarity sobbing and crying her eyes out.
>"Rarity, what's wrong? Did- did something terrible happen?"
>Rartiy tries to talk, but can't, and now cries even more.
>Rarity signals Fluttershy via handigns that she lost her voice, and so did the other ponies of the mane 6.
>Fluttershy tries to comfort Rarity, but doesn't really know what to do, so she asks the viewers for assistance.
"Uhm, I'm really really sorry to bother you, but, my friends need help rrreeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaally bad, so, uhm, I hope it wouldn't be too much of a hassle, but, could you lend us your voice, please? I mean, I'd understand if you rather wouldn't, but, it would make me and the other ponies really happy if you did, so... *Squee smile*"
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Yeah, I don't know why I wrote the first one how I did it, either. I'm tired, I heard some music, and things got out of hand. I hereby officially apologize. From now on nearly all of my writing will be up to standards, but still feel free to post improvements.
Last edited by Deusinsanus on Thu Feb 23, 2012 12:35 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : You really don't wanna know what the first attempt looked like.)