Clip scene :
General idea: a pony stranded on a desert island, all alone. (Macintosh)
The idea of this is that we can have a story that pops up every once in a while (continuous) and not always have random clips.
Story: Macintosh gets washed ashore and bonks his head on a rock. He/she wakes up from the knock and gets up slowly. Looks around and is disappointed of the fact that he’s alone.
Clip one dialogue:
*birds squawking as the camera is pointing at the sun*
*camera pans down towards the shore* (currently empty)
2sec *Macintosh gets washed ashore*
*BONK*
Mac: AH…What the hell happened *while eyes skwinting and opening slowly*
*gets up while rubbing head*
Mac: where…where am i?
*camera pans out to show the whole island*
*camera pans quickly back down to his face*
Mac: *sighs in disappointment* Fuck.
(clip ends)
Clip 2, (super short)
Idea: Macintosh becomes delusional and flirts with a coconut.
Clip 2, dialogue.
Setting: night time, Macintosh is alone on the island sitting by the rocks. Sketchy manmade candles are lit, and camera slowly pans to Macintosh from the left.
[Week 3]
*camera pans to Macintosh*
*you see him holding a coconut*
*camera zooms into eyes*
*the look in his eyes, are the eyes of a man in love*
*zoom back out*
Mac: How long have you been around here pretty lady.
Coconut: …
Mac: Don’t be shy, I’ll comfort you.
*Macintosh drops to the ground with the coconut* (camera is still, so all you see is him drop and that’s it)
(Clip 2, END)
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Script 3:
Another random scene
Idea: 2 drunken ponies in an alleyway (super sketchy)
*Both ponies walking all lopsided*
P1: hey, do you have any idea where we’re going?
P2: Ya ya, I take this path every day.
*camera changes angle* (behind spike, looking at the 2 ponies)
*both ponies laughing out loud like the evil dog in Rocky and Bullwickle* (drunken laugh)
*spike walks up to them wearing a trench coat*
Spike: Hey, you 2 ponies wanna see something cool.
*both ponies look at each other, look back*
Both: Haha sure.
*camera zooms out to show spikes back*
*Spike opens his trench coat and flashes both ponies while they have super shocked faces on*
(as soon as the you see the shocked faces the scene cuts real quickly)
(SCENE ENDS)
the idea here is so that people don't know what he's showing but have the clear assumption that it's sexual. However this is a simple trick. you guys can write up a second scene for this clip. (possibly jetpacks in his trenchcoat, idk)
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these both definitly have room for improvement so don't be
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General idea: a pony stranded on a desert island, all alone. (Macintosh)
The idea of this is that we can have a story that pops up every once in a while (continuous) and not always have random clips.
Story: Macintosh gets washed ashore and bonks his head on a rock. He/she wakes up from the knock and gets up slowly. Looks around and is disappointed of the fact that he’s alone.
Clip one dialogue:
*birds squawking as the camera is pointing at the sun*
*camera pans down towards the shore* (currently empty)
2sec *Macintosh gets washed ashore*
*BONK*
Mac: AH…What the hell happened *while eyes skwinting and opening slowly*
*gets up while rubbing head*
Mac: where…where am i?
*camera pans out to show the whole island*
*camera pans quickly back down to his face*
Mac: *sighs in disappointment* Fuck.
(clip ends)
Clip 2, (super short)
Idea: Macintosh becomes delusional and flirts with a coconut.
Clip 2, dialogue.
Setting: night time, Macintosh is alone on the island sitting by the rocks. Sketchy manmade candles are lit, and camera slowly pans to Macintosh from the left.
[Week 3]
*camera pans to Macintosh*
*you see him holding a coconut*
*camera zooms into eyes*
*the look in his eyes, are the eyes of a man in love*
*zoom back out*
Mac: How long have you been around here pretty lady.
Coconut: …
Mac: Don’t be shy, I’ll comfort you.
*Macintosh drops to the ground with the coconut* (camera is still, so all you see is him drop and that’s it)
(Clip 2, END)
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Script 3:
Another random scene
Idea: 2 drunken ponies in an alleyway (super sketchy)
*Both ponies walking all lopsided*
P1: hey, do you have any idea where we’re going?
P2: Ya ya, I take this path every day.
*camera changes angle* (behind spike, looking at the 2 ponies)
*both ponies laughing out loud like the evil dog in Rocky and Bullwickle* (drunken laugh)
*spike walks up to them wearing a trench coat*
Spike: Hey, you 2 ponies wanna see something cool.
*both ponies look at each other, look back*
Both: Haha sure.
*camera zooms out to show spikes back*
*Spike opens his trench coat and flashes both ponies while they have super shocked faces on*
(as soon as the you see the shocked faces the scene cuts real quickly)
(SCENE ENDS)
the idea here is so that people don't know what he's showing but have the clear assumption that it's sexual. However this is a simple trick. you guys can write up a second scene for this clip. (possibly jetpacks in his trenchcoat, idk)
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these both definitly have room for improvement so don't be
to post comments